ഓര്‍മ്മ ദിവസം – by Nidheesh

Posted: January 25, 2008 in Literature, Stories
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Innu ayalude bharyaude ormadivsamanu. Isa marichittu 2 varsham tikayunnu . Avalude photoyude munpil mezhukuthiri kattichu, ayal coffe undakki kazhichu pathivayee kazhikunna chayayil ninnoru mattam. Itahyirunno isayude ishttavum…

Palarum Freddye mattoru vivahathinu nirbandhichu. Pakshe ayalkkathinu kazhinjilla,karanam ayal isaye atramatram snehikkunnu. “thaan mattorale snehikkukayanennum, aayalkku vendi kaathirikkukayanennum” Isa paranjappolum freddy avale veruthilla. Ellam upekshichu Isa tannilottu madangivarum ennu ayal pratheekshichu, alla… aagrahichu. Avalkku vendi Freddy ayale tanne ishttapettu thudangiyirunnu.

Madyapichu bodhamillathe kidanna oru rathriyil ,kalil kettipidichu karyayunna Isa .. oru avyakthmachitram ayaalude ullilundu. Yaatharthyamano,allayo ennu thirichariyanavatha oru mangiya orma. Pittennu ravile coffe um aaye vanna Isayde kannil appozhum vishdam niranjirunnu ,ennalum aval chirikkan shramichathayee ayalkku tonni.

“Freddyude madyapanavum ,updravavum sahikkavayyathe garbhiniyaya Isa aathmahatya cheythu”. Ellarum ayale kuttappeduthi. Shapavakkukal ayale vedanippichilla. Karanam ayal Isaye snehichitteyullu .Cheyyatha kuttamennu paranju ayalkku aareum onnum bhodyappeduttanudayirunnilla.

Churchinu munpil pookkal vilkkarulla muzhinja uduppitta thamizathy pennine annayal kandilla. Pathivu tettichu pookal illathe ayal Isaye kanan chennu. Kallarayude mukalil irunna oru chuvanna rosappovinte mullu kondu ayalude kail ninnum raktham podinju.

“Njan aanu athavide vachathu” shabdam kettu Freddy thirinju nokki. ” njan ithu eduthathu isakyu ishttamayilla ennu tonnunnu”. Freddy aparichitanodu paranju .”Alla suhrithe…avalude hridaythil ninnum podinja rakthamanithu. Njanaanu Isayde sneham ningalkku nashttapeduthiyathu. Ithu marikkunnathinu munpu Isa enikku ezhuthiyathanu “. Virayarnna kaikal kondu freddy ayalude
kail ninnum kathu vangi thurannu nokki.

“Harii.. ninnodenikkulla sneham badyathayum ,freddyodulla ente sneham kuttabodhavum aayathu kondu njan aathmahatya cheyyunnu. Maranam enikku shwashatamaya samadhanam nalkatte. Chilappolokke snehathinu maranam ennukoodi arthamundallo. Ella tettum vidhiyudethakki maativachu njan ennennekkumaye rakshapedunnu. Nanmakal nernnu kondu Isabellayum , ninte pirakkathe poya kunjum . ”

Nertha manjiloode ayal nadannu povunnathum nokki Freddy ninnu. Sneham apoornam aavunnathum nokki. Kallarayude mukalil thandil mullukal illatha oru vadiya poomottu appozhum irippundayirunnu. “snehikkappedunnavar orikkalum nirbhagyavaanmar ennu vilikkapedathirikkatte” ennevideyo vaayichatu ayaal orthu .Kallaryil mukham cherthu karayumbozhum ayaalude prarthana itonnu matram aayirunnu .

“Thirichu kittatha snehathinum athintetaya oru mazhavillundu …

Peyyathe nilkkunnna snehameghangalkkidayil oru mazhavillu..”

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Comments
  1. AncySherin says:

    Awesome Nidheesh!!!!
    Superb Dialog!!!

    “Thirichu kittatha snehathinum athintetaya oru mazhavillundu …

    Peyyathe nilkkunnna snehameghangalkkidayil oru mazhavillu..”

  2. Sumi says:

    lalithamaya sahithayathillode athi gahanamaya
    oru sandesham kodukan e ezhuthukaran sradhichitundu.
    E cheriya praythil pakvathayarna rachana shaili ….

    Eniyum , oru padu sahithya shrishtikal , nava sahithya lokam
    kathirikunnu.
    Thudarnnum ezhuthuka
    gagadeeshwaran anugrahikatte…..
    adutha thavana ezhuthumbol kurachu vyathasthathayarnna oru prameyam pratheekshikunnu

  3. pradeepkumar says:

    Theere nalla abhiprayam alla enik ee rachanaye patty. Sahithya rachanakal eppozhum oru sandesam ulkollanam, vakkukalude kasrath avaruth athil. Theere lalithamaya bhasha alla upayogichirikkunnath. Athu pole prameyathile avarthanam. Kadha oru lakshya botham ellath anennu otta vayanayil thanne manasilakum. Kadha thanthu theere saktham alla. Kalakaran aadmavishkaram sadyamallathe varumbol aanu oru madyamathe aasrayikkunnath. ezhuthil kooduthal sradhichal improve chaiyyan kazhiyum. All the Best

  4. Sumi says:

    ethoru kala shristiyum sahyrdyarude athmavil sparshikanam. vakukalude kasrathalla;
    shrishti , athamavil ninnu varumbolee athinu geevan undakku
    e shristi ente manya suhruthinte athmavil ninanu vannathu. punarjanmathekal sakthamaya prameyam.sneham athu arkum orikalum vivechikan sadhikatha prathibasam anu.
    ororutharkkum avaravarude manasinte chanchatam anu sneham.
    aduthu ullpolum doore thiranjukondirikunna manjadi kuru pole; sooryakanthiyude kathiripu anu chilarkku pranayam.
    eratta mainakalude kala niswanam anu vere chilarkku pranayam. Sadarana manushyar thirichu kittuna parayanathinu anu pradhanyam nalkiyirikunathu. pakshe ente manya suhruthinte ee lekhnam thirichu kittatha snehathinte vyapthiii vilichariyikunnu.
    kozhinju veezhunna pookalude kanneru arum kanarilla.minaminuginte teeratha dughavum arum kanarilla geevichirikanna oro nimaishavum mattulavarku vendi jeevikumboleeee geevitham dhanyam aku.
    E kadhayil e ashayathinanu kooduthal pradhanyam nalkiyirikunathu.

  5. pradeepkumar says:

    sneham orikkalum manasinte chanchatam alla suhruthe. snehathe vivechikkan pattillanno? theere sariyalla. ente kadhakruth suhruthinepole neeyum samsarikkunnu. snehathe vivechichariyuk thanne venam. engile edhartha snehathe bhahumanikkan kazhiyu. snehathe kurich thangalude viseshanangal enik ishtapettu. vayikkan kollam. vakkukalk soudaryavum und. paksham ardham theere pora. ath messages onnum convey chaiyyunnilla. sahithya bhashayil paranjal aasaya daridram. pine njan paranjath sahithya srishtiyude lalithyam anu athinte sambath ennanu. athukondanu basheer, MT evaroke sahrudhaya manasil edam nediyath. angane aanu kalathe athijeevicha classickukal pirannath.

  6. nidheesh says:

    priyappetta ente kootukare ,

    orikkal polum thirichu kittillatha snehathinu vendi kaathirikkunna oralanu Freddy. Jeevithathil Isa ,Freddy ye snehichittilla . Annayalkkalkku Isa ennenkilum thirichu varumenna oru prathekksha yenkilum undayirunnu . Pakshe marana sheshavum ayal avale snehikkunnu. Karanam aa snehamanu ayale jeevippikkkunnathu . allenkil athinu vendi matramanu ayal jeevikkunnathu.

    “Sneham nirvachikkappedanullathalla, athu thirichariyappedanullathanu “

  7. Sumi says:

    ethoru thudakarante shristi anu , mahuthukalaya manushayrude shristikayi ethine tharathamya pedutharauthu. avar kara theerna ezhuthukr anu.
    urukkiya swarnathe pole patharamattu ullavar. ente manya suhruthinte thudakkam mathramanithu. bhaviyude vagdhanam anu adeham
    kochu kochu shristikalumayi adeham adehathinte varavu ariyichirikunnu

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